Question 1073: Using Voice in Character and Narration

jdsawyer Deep Character / Writing May 18, 2023 May 15, 2023

Nichole asks:

How can I make my first person narrator voice more distinctive? If I changed to third person, would that work better?

Resources Mentioned:
I, Claudius and Claudius the God, both by Robert Graves
The Clarke Lantham Mysteries by J. Daniel Sawyer
The Parasol Protectorate by Gail Carriger

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